Expert guests include Barry Feldman, founder of Feldman Creative
and Demian Farnworth, chief content writer at Copyblogger and
Rainmaker Digital.
We discuss: Purpose of headlines, characteristics of great
headlines and expert tips on creating them.
Little known fact on Demian: Digs vacuums, dancing and books.
(Dancing books that suck up dirt are the best!) A common
characteristic of good copywriters is they have a sense of
humor.
Headlines are forever: The importance and
permanence of headlines to content over social media or other
shinny things.
Be a relaxed, confident writer when you write headlines because
you have to take some risks if you want to get attention. You have
to be bold, stand out, have a sense of humor. Need to consistently
do it.
Point of headline is to get them to read the first sentence.
Headlines are everywhere and used everywhere as
hooks to the reader. They’re the first thing you read and if
they suck they’re the only thing you’ll read.
The challenge we face: people are on information overload.
Imagine your reader is walking down a busy New York City street and
your job is to clothesline her to get her to pay attention to you.
Your headline must be meaningful and believable to her. The only
way you can do that is by knowing her inside and out: fears, what
keeps her up at night, what are her hopes and dreams?
Social media has changed the way we write headlines in big
ways. Look at sites like Gawker, Business Insider and
Upworthy. They all write headlines to get the click. But your
content must deliver on the promise or you will fail to earn more
clicks – you’ve taken a n emotional and relational withdrawal -
you’re not going to win them over next time. Your content must
deliver on the promise of the headline.
Barry: “A really good headline selects its audience. In
other words, you need to say something in your headline the reader
things, ‘This is for me.’”
Demian: “Don’t be afraid to disqualify people with your
headline. The narrower your target the higher your conversion is
going to be.”
Your headline is not for everybody, so don’t try and please
everybody.
Safe example of a headline that’s probably going to under
deliver because it’s for too broad of an audience: 5
Essential Ingredients of the World’s Greatest Recipes.
Better: 5 Essential Ingredients of the World’s Greatest
Guacamole Recipes. There’s risk there, but it’s more engaging and
selective to those who are interested in making great
guacamole.
Characteristics of great headlines:
Add urgency to your headlines by including a deadline and a
benefit to acting on the promise, or a consequence for not doing
something important.
Useful headline: How to Wash Dishes.
More attractive: How to Wash Dishes with Vinegar.
Make it ultra-specific: 4 Ways to Wash Dishes with
Vinegar.
Take on the urgency element: 4 Ways to Wash Dishes with Vinegar
Before You Die of Cholera.
Barry’s article on HEADLINES as an acronym for writing
headlines: H = Helpful, E = Emotion, A = Ask, D = Do’s and Don’ts,
L = List, I = Inspire, N = Nightmare, E = Empathy, S= Success.
We talk about putting emotion and empathy in your
headlines. And to do that we must realize the most important
thing is to understand the problems of the person you’re trying to
reach.
Books and articles mentioned:
Influence: They Psychology of Persuasion by Robert
Cialdini
The Copywriter’s Handbook, Robert Bly
12 Writing Exercises That Will Transform Your Copy
Today, Demian Farnworth
Headlines: A 9-Letter Cheat Sheet for Writing a Winner Every
Time, Barry Feldman
Your Headlines Suck. Here’s What You Can Do About It, Erik
Deckers
Two Ways to
Add Urgency to Your Headlines Right Now, Demian Farnworth
In Part 2 of Eyeball Grabbing Headlines:
Using templates and formulas for writing eyeball grabbing
headlines.
Why you should take risks when writing headlines
Demian’s favorite dog-eared book for getting inspiration on
writing headlines
Barry’s axiom for sticking your neck out.